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* Minor corrections on README.en.md * Minor corrections on rules
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‎README.en.md

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* [Choose the most appropriate technologies](/chapters/BP_015_en.md)
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* [Use performance-oriented application forks](/chapters/BP_016_en.md)
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* [Choose appropriate data formats](/chapters/BP_017_en.md)
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* [Reducing the number of domains serving resources](/chapters/BP_018_en.md)
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* [Replace official social networks sharing buttons ](/chapters/BP_019_en.md)
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* [Reduce the number of domains serving resources](/chapters/BP_018_en.md)
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* [Replace official social networks share buttons ](/chapters/BP_019_en.md)
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* [Divide CSS](/chapters/BP_021_en.md)
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* [Limit the number of CSS](/chapters/BP_022_en.md)
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* [Use CSS instead of images](/chapters/BP_023_en.md)
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* [Prefer standard fonts](/chapters/BP_029_en.md)
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* [Prefer glyphs over images](/chapters/BP_030_en.md)
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* [Validate pages with W3C tools](/chapters/BP_031_en.md)
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* [Externalise CSS and Javascript](/chapters/BP_032_en.md)
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* [Avoid resizing browser images](/chapters/BP_034_en.md)
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* [Externalize CSS and Javascript](/chapters/BP_032_en.md)
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* [Avoid resizing images in the browser](/chapters/BP_034_en.md)
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* [Avoid using raster images for the interface](/chapters/BP_035_en.md)
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* [Optimize vector images](/chapters/BP_036_en.md)
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* [Use lazy loading](/chapters/BP_037_en.md)
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* [Avoid modifications during DOM traversal](/chapters/BP_041_en.md)
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* [Hide DOM elements while they are being modified](/chapters/BP_042_en.md)
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* [Minimize repaint (appearence) and reflow (layout)](/chapters/BP_043_en.md)
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* [Use event delegations](/chapters/BP_044_en.md)
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* [Use event delegation](/chapters/BP_044_en.md)
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* [Modify several CSS properties at once](/chapters/BP_045_en.md)
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* [Validate your code with a Linter](/chapters/BP_046_en.md)
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* [Cache frequently accessed objects in Javascript](/chapters/BP_049_en.md)
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* [Reducing access to the DOM via JavaScript](/chapters/BP_054_en.md)
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* [Reduce DOM access via JavaScript](/chapters/BP_054_en.md)
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* [Use all levels of CMS cache](/chapters/BP_057_en.md)
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* [Optimize and generate media before importing them in a CMS](/chapters/BP_058_en.md)
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* [Encode audio files outsides of the CMS](/chapters/BP_060_en.md)
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* [Encode audio files outside of the CMS](/chapters/BP_060_en.md)
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* [Cache often-used computed Data](/chapters/BP_064_en.md)
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* [Remove all warnings and notices](/chapters/BP_070_en.md)
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* [Avoid performing SQL queries inside a loop](/chapters/BP_072_en.md)
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* [Have an end of life strategy for the website](/chapters/BP_085_en.md)
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* [Choose an eco-friendly web-host](/chapters/BP_086_en.md)
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* [Choose an eco-friendly electricity provider](/chapters/BP_087_en.md)
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* [Adapte service quality and availability level](/chapters/BP_088_en.md)
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* [Adapt service quality and availability level](/chapters/BP_088_en.md)
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* [Use virtualized servers](/chapters/BP_089_en.md)
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* [Optimize Server Energy Efficiency](/chapters/BP_090_en.md)
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* [Install the bare minimum on the servers](/chapters/BP_091_en.md)
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* [Put the whole caches in RAM (opcode and kvs)](/chapters/BP_092_en.md)
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* [Store data in the cloud](/chapters/BP_093_en.md)
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* [Host resources (CSS/JS) on a cookie-free domain](/chapters/BP_094_en.md)
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* [Avoid redirects](/chapters/BP_095_en.md)
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* [Displaying Static Error Pages](/chapters/BP_096_en.md)
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* [Display static error pages](/chapters/BP_096_en.md)
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* [Use asynchronous servers](/chapters/BP_097_en.md)
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* [Use a CDN](/chapters/BP_098_en.md)
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* [Use a HTTP cache](/chapters/BP_099_en.md)
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* [Add Expires or Cache-Control headers](/chapters/BP_101_en.md)
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* [Cache Ajax responses](/chapters/BP_102_en.md)
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* [Reduce server logs as much as possible](/chapters/BP_103_en.md)
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* [Reduce Apache's DNS lookup](/chapters/BP_104_en.md)
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* [Disable Apache DNS lookup](/chapters/BP_104_en.md)
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* [Apache Vhost : disable AllowOverride](/chapters/BP_105_en.md)
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* [Disable binary logs](/chapters/BP_106_en.md)
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* [Compress documents](/chapters/BP_107_en.md)
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* [Adapt audio formats to listening contexts](/chapters/BP_112_en.md)
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* [Adapt texts to the web](/chapters/BP_113_en.md)
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* [Adapt videos to watching contexts](/chapters/BP_114_en.md)
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* [Use less analytics tools and limite data collection](/chapters/BP_4001_en.md)
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* [Use less analytics tools and limit data collection](/chapters/BP_4001_en.md)
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* [Limit the use of animated GIFs](/chapters/BP_4002_en.md)
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* [Avoid autoplay for videos and audio content](/chapters/BP_4003_en.md)
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* [Use CSS containers](/chapters/BP_4004_en.md)
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* [Provide textual alternatives for multimedia content](/chapters/BP_4005_en.md)
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* [Provide textual alternatives to multimedia content](/chapters/BP_4005_en.md)
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* [Prefer HTTP/2 over HTTP/1](/chapters/BP_4006_en.md)
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* [Save bandwidth with ServiceWorker](/chapters/BP_4007_en.md)
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* [Set up an efficient sitemap](/chapters/BP_4008_en.md)
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* [Set up a data expiration and deletion policy.](/chapters/BP_4012_en.md)
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* [Limit canvas use](/chapters/BP_4013_en.md)
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* [Make sure that user journeys allow users to carry out their intended action](/chapters/BP_4014_en.md)
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* [Have page titles and meta descriptions relevant to pages content..](/chapters/BP_4015_en.md)
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* [Have page titles and meta descriptions relevant to pages content](/chapters/BP_4015_en.md)
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* [Use the latest language version](/chapters/BP_4016_en.md)
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* [Only load data/code when necessary](/chapters/BP_4017_en.md)
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* [Delete unused features](/chapters/BP_4018_en.md)

‎chapters/BP_006_en.md

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### Principe de validation
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‎chapters/BP_017_en.md

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| database fields with an innapropriate format | 15% |

‎chapters/BP_043_en.md

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Server logs (web, application, database) can become very large. It is recommended to configure them. By adjusting the application's log level at the highest possible level (e.g. only information/warning/error) and by logging only relevant information, disk writes are avoided, the number of CPU cycles is reduced as well as storage space use.
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## Prefer PWAs over native mobile applications that are similar to the website
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However, PWAs (Progressive Web App) can spare double to triple developments and maintenance costs that would result from a native or hybrid mobile application (React native, Flutter) when a mobile applications is required and fully or partially reproduce the associated website.
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PWAs reduce mobile devices obsolescence risk and lower bandwidth use since they are not tied to operating systems (OS) and are often lighter than native mobile applications. This is why several social networks have developed PWAs to conquer markets with low bandwidth networks.
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PWA reduce mobile devices obsolescence risk and lower bandwidth use since they are not tied to operating systems (OS) and are often lighter than native mobile applications. This is why several social networks have developed PWA to conquer markets with low bandwidth networks.
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