new MHF commentary tweaks

Author: towerofnix

album/more-homestuck-fandom.yaml

@@ -197,7 +197,7 @@ Referenced Tracks:
 - Crustacean
 - Rex Duodecim Angelus
 Commentary: |-
-   <i>Malcolm Brown:</i> ([Tumblr](https://dragonxvi.tumblr.com/post/101437602443/another-music-doodle-today-is-there-a-word-for))
+   <i>Malcolm Brown:</i> ([Tumblr](https://dragonxvi.tumblr.com/post/101437602443/another-music-doodle-today-is-there-a-word-for), 10/31/2014)
 
    Another music doodle today. Is there a word for those? A Moodle? Muudle? Y'know what sod it it's a Musicoodle.
 
@@ -445,7 +445,7 @@ Referenced Tracks:
 - Cascade (Beta)
 - Dissension (Original)
 Commentary: |-
-   <i>Malcolm Brown:</i> ([Tumblr](https://dragonxvi.tumblr.com/post/40423027190/canned-corner-flight-of-the-white-wolf-ahh))
+   <i>Malcolm Brown:</i> ([Tumblr](https://dragonxvi.tumblr.com/post/40423027190/canned-corner-flight-of-the-white-wolf-ahh), 1/13/2013)
 
    <b>Canned Corner: Flight of the White Wolf</b>
 
@@ -1099,11 +1099,11 @@ Referenced Tracks:
 - Showtime (Original Mix)
 - Dissension (Original)
 Commentary: |-
-   <i>Toby Fox:</i> ([Tumblr](https://fwugradiation.tumblr.com/post/36687851465/valor-a-combination-of-the-original-showtime-and))
+   <i>Toby Fox:</i> ([Tumblr](https://fwugradiation.tumblr.com/post/36687851465/valor-a-combination-of-the-original-showtime-and), 11/27/2012)
 
    "Valor"
 
-   A combination of the [[track:showtime-original-mix|original Showtime]] and [[track:dissension-original|Dissension]] I made to serve as a strife theme for Jake English a year ago. I was actually going to make strife tunes for all of the alpha kids, but I was worried that Valor might be feel repetitive with [[track:assault|Assault]] on the same album. Then [[artist:michael-guy-bowman|Bowman]] made [[Elephant Gun]] and I just stopped working on it.
+   A combination of the [[track:showtime-original-mix|original Showtime]] and [[track:dissension-original|Dissension]] I made to serve as a strife theme for Jake English a year ago. I was actually going to make strife tunes for all of the alpha kids, but I was worried that Valor might be feel repetitive with [[track:assault|Assault]] on the same album. Then Bowman made [[Elephant Gun]] and I just stopped working on it.
 
    Interestingly this file was last modified on 11/5/11.
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