Unclear description of git restore -s vs git revert

[astroDimitrios]

How could the content be improved?

In the Reverting a committ challenge there is a paragraph:

The command git revert is different from git restore -s [commit ID] . because git restore returns the files not yet committed within the local repository to a previous state, whereas git revert reverses changes committed to the local and project repositories.

Which is hard to understand, we are considering changing it to:

The command git revert is
different from git restore -s [commit ID] ..
git restore restores files within the local repository to a previous state,
whereas git revert restores the files to a previous state and
adds then commits these changes to the local repository.
So git revert here is the same as git restore -s [commit ID]
followed by git commit -am Reverts: [commit].

So it's clearer what the difference is between the two commands.

Which part of the content does your suggestion apply to?

https://swcarpentry.github.io/git-novice/05-history.html