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Author: choldgraf

hub.md

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 ## What is JupyterHub?
 
-JupyterHub provides remote access to Jupyter servers on shared infrastructure
-in order to make computational environments and resources more accessible to
-students, researchers, and data scientists.
+JupyterHub brings the power of notebooks to groups of users. It gives
+users access to computational environments and resources without burdening
+the users with installation and maintenance tasks. Users - including students,
+researchers, and data scientists - can get their work done in their own
+workspaces on shared resources which can be managed efficiently by system administrators.
 
 JupyterHub runs in the cloud or on your own hardware, and makes it possible
 to serve a pre-configured data science environment to any user in the world.
@@ -21,12 +23,12 @@ academic courses, and large-scale infrastructure.
 
 ## Key features of JupyterHub
 
-**Flexible** - JupyterHub can be used to serve a variety of environments. It
+**Customizable** - JupyterHub can be used to serve a variety of environments. It
 supports dozens of kernels with the Jupyter server, and can be used to serve
 a variety of user interfaces including the Jupyter Notebook, Jupyter Lab,
 RStudio, nteract, and more.
 
-**Secure** - JupyterHub can be configured with authentication in order to
+**Flexible** - JupyterHub can be configured with authentication in order to
 provide access to a subset of users. Authentication is pluggable, supporting
 a number of authentication protocols (such as OAuth and GitHub).
 
@@ -36,34 +38,38 @@ with up to tens of thousands of users.
 
 **Portable** - JupyterHub is entirely open-source and designed
 to be run on a variety of infrastructure. This includes commercial cloud
-providers, virtual machines, even your own laptop hardware.
+providers, virtual machines, or even your own laptop hardware.
+
+The foundational JupyterHub code and technology can be found in the [JupyterHub
+repository](https://github.com/jupyterhub/jupyterhub). This repository and the
+[JupyterHub documentation](https://jupyterhub.readthedocs.io/)
+contain more information about the internals of JupyterHub, its customization, and its
+configuration.
 
 ## Deploy a JupyterHub
 
 The Jupyter Community curates two JupyterHub "distributions" for deploying
 in the cloud. Follow the links below for more information.
 
-**[The Littlest JupyterHub](https://tljh.jupyter.org)** is a lightweight
-method to install JupyterHub on a **single virtual machine**. The TLJH
-guide has information on creating a VM on several cloud providers, as well
-as installing and customizing JupyterHub so that users may access it at a
-public URL.
-
 **[Zero to JupyterHub for Kubernetes](https://z2jh.jupyter.org)** deploys
 JupyterHub on Kubernetes using Docker, allowing it to be scaled and
 maintained efficiently for **large numbers of users**. Zero to JupyterHub
-is a Helm Chart for deploying JupyterHub quickly, as well as a semi-complete
+is a Helm Chart for deploying JupyterHub quickly, as well as a
 guide to deploying and configuring your JupyterHub on Kubernetes.
 
-**[The JupyterHub repository](https://github.com/jupyterhub/jupyterhub)**
-contains more information about the internals of JupyterHub and how to
-deploy it on more custom setups (such as your own laptop).
+**[The Littlest JupyterHub](https://tljh.jupyter.org)**, a recent and evolving
+distribution designed for smaller deployments, is a lightweight
+method to install JupyterHub on a **single virtual machine**. The Littlest
+JupyterHub (also known as TLJH), provides a
+guide with information on creating a VM on several cloud providers, as well
+as installing and customizing JupyterHub so that users may access it at a
+public URL.
 
 ## Join the community
 
-JupyterHub is an open-source and community-driven project. We'd love for you
-to join our community and contribute code, time, comments, or just
-appreciation.
+Like all Project Jupyter efforts, JupyterHub is an
+open-source and community-driven project. We'd love for you
+to join our community and contribute code, time, comments, or appreciation.
 
 **[The JupyterHub Gitter Channel](https://gitter.im/jupyterhub/jupyterhub)**
 is a place where the JupyterHub community discuses developments in the