feedback on try text

Author: minrk

_layouts/try.html

@@ -1,18 +1,20 @@
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 layout: default
-title: Try Jupyter!
+title: Try Jupyter
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 <section>
   <div class="header header-grey">
     <div class="container">
-      <h2>Try Jupyter!</h2>
+      <h2>Try Jupyter</h2>
       <p class="lead">
         You can try Jupyter out right now, without installing anything.
-        Click the desired link below and you will get a temporary Jupyter server
-        just for you, running on <a href="https://mybinder.org">mybinder.org</a>.
-        If you like it, you can <a href="https://jupyter.org/install.html">
-        install Jupyter</a> yourself.
+        Select an example below and you will get a temporary Jupyter
+        server just for you, running on
+        <a href="https://mybinder.org">mybinder.org</a>.
+        If you like it, you can
+        <a href="https://jupyter.org/install.html">install Jupyter</a>
+        yourself.
       </p>
     </div>
   </div>