PD-2422 / 25.04 / Update DisksScreen.md (by linzi-ix)

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Original PR: #4312
Jira URL: https://ixsystems.atlassian.net/browse/PD-2422

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Vale Style Guide Issues

📊 Summary: 34 issues found in changed files - 5 errors, 0 warnings, 29 suggestions

Changed files with issues:

content/SCALEUIReference/Storage/DisksScreen.md (34 issues)

• Line 19 - suggestion: Spell out 'RPM' on first use
• Line 19 - suggestion: Spell out 'HDD' on first use
• Line 30 - suggestion: Keep sentences under 30 words
• Lines 30, 48 - suggestion: Spell out 'SMART' on first use
• Lines 44, 46, 48, 67 - error: Don't add '(s)' to a singular noun. Use plural instead.
• Lines 52, 60, 61, 77, 110, 111, 112, 119, 170, 188 - suggestion: Use active voice instead of passive voice
• Lines 60, 170 - suggestion: Don't use language (such as 'disabled') that defines people by their disability.
• Lines 61, 171 - suggestion: Don't use language (such as 'Disabled') that defines people by their disability.
• Line 146 - error: 'the' is repeated!

🔧 To fix: Review the issues above and update your documentation accordingly.