Improved header copy #10
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A question I'd pose to the dev is if it's possible to remove one or more of those bullet points at the bottom. For example, is it helpful for people new to AEON that they know the difficulty "retargets at every block"? |
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As seen in issue #2, the current header of Aeon.cash uses language that is over the top, and even American Pegasus himself, the author, suggested the words should be changed.
This PR suggests a new line body of copy for the header that still plays off the original idea. Since AEON is about mobile devices, it sort of imagines an age/era/aeon where everybody is transacting privately (CryptoNote) but with their phones.
New header (click to expand):
Hopefully this feels a lot less pumpy and yet communicates a vision to somebody interacting with AEON for the first time.
Note: I did edit some CSS to make the screenshot look that good. I can make those CSS edits in a future PR. Also note that the words in the actual commit differ slightly from the screenshot.