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Deep sleep docs update with guard switch #4410

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Pull request in esphome with YAML changes (if applicable): esphome/esphome#7718

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The documentation for the "Deep Sleep Component" has been updated to include new features and configuration options. Notably, a "Deep Sleep Guard" switch has been introduced, allowing users to prevent the device from entering deep sleep mode. The configuration now includes optional parameters deep_sleep_id and guard. The existing actions deep_sleep.enter and deep_sleep.prevent remain, with added emphasis on their interaction with the new guard feature.

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components/deep_sleep.rst Updated documentation to include the "Deep Sleep Guard" switch, new configuration options (deep_sleep_id and guard), and clarified interactions with existing actions (deep_sleep.enter, deep_sleep.prevent).

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sequenceDiagram
    participant User
    participant DeepSleepComponent
    participant GuardSwitch

    User->>DeepSleepComponent: Request to enter deep sleep
    alt Guard is enabled
        GuardSwitch-->>DeepSleepComponent: Prevent deep sleep
        DeepSleepComponent-->>User: Ignored request
    else Guard is disabled
        DeepSleepComponent-->>User: Enter deep sleep
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components/deep_sleep.rst (3)

196-197: Improve clarity and structure of the guard feature explanation.

The explanation could be clearer with better structure and grammar. Consider this revision:

-You may have calls to deep_sleep.allow or enter from other places which can re-enable deep sleep. An on_value handler based on a periodically checked sensor value (battery level okay: prevent, low: allow), or some other automation from Home Assistant. In that case this can be overriden and the device goes to deep sleep nevertheless. To be absolutely sure, you can use this switch. When enabled and the timer reaches run_duration, deep sleep will be postponed until it is disabled again. Any call to deep_sleep.enter will be ignored, too.
+The Deep Sleep Guard switch provides absolute control over deep sleep behavior. When enabled:
+
+- Deep sleep will be postponed even if the run_duration timer expires
+- All calls to deep_sleep.enter will be ignored
+- The device will remain awake until the guard is disabled
+
+This is particularly useful when:
+- Multiple automations might trigger deep sleep (e.g., battery level checks, Home Assistant automations)
+- You need to ensure the device stays awake during critical operations

198-205: Enhance the code example with comments and additional use cases.

The example could be more helpful with explanatory comments and common use cases. Consider expanding it:

     .. code-block:: yaml

         switch:
           - platform: deep_sleep
             deep_sleep_id: deep_sleep_1
             guard:
               name: Deep Sleep Guard
+              # Optional: Additional switch configuration
+              icon: mdi:sleep-off  # Custom icon
+              inverted: false      # Switch behavior (ON = guard enabled)
+
+         # Example: Prevent deep sleep during OTA updates
+         on_...:
+           then:
+             - switch.turn_on: deep_sleep_guard_id
+             # Perform OTA update
+             - switch.turn_off: deep_sleep_guard_id

196-208: Consider restructuring the Deep Sleep Guard documentation.

While the content is technically accurate, consider reorganizing it into a dedicated section for better visibility and clarity:

  1. Move the guard feature documentation into a new section titled "Deep Sleep Guard" before the "ESP32 Wakeup Pin Mode" section
  2. Structure the section with clear subsections:
    • Overview and Use Cases
    • Configuration
    • Examples
    • Integration with Other Features

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- **deep_sleep_id** (*Optional*, :ref:`config-id`): ID of the deep_sleep component.
- **guard** (*Optional*, switch): This is the switch to guard the device from deep sleep. All properties from sensor, at least the name is required to show up in HA. Defaults to off.
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Expand configuration documentation with more details.

The configuration options need more detailed explanations:

-**deep_sleep_id** (*Optional*, :ref:`config-id`): ID of the deep_sleep component.
-**guard** (*Optional*, switch): This is the switch to guard the device from deep sleep. All properties from sensor, at least the name is required to show up in HA. Defaults to off.
+**deep_sleep_id** (*Optional*, :ref:`config-id`): The ID of the deep sleep component this guard switch controls. If not specified, it will control the default deep sleep component.
+
+**guard** (*Optional*, :ref:`Switch <config-switch>`): Configuration for the guard switch:
+
+  - **name** (**Required**, string): The name of the switch in Home Assistant
+  - All other options from :ref:`Switch <config-switch>` are supported (icon, inverted, etc.)
+  - The switch defaults to OFF (guard disabled)
+  - When ON, prevents the device from entering deep sleep regardless of other conditions
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- **deep_sleep_id** (*Optional*, :ref:`config-id`): ID of the deep_sleep component.
- **guard** (*Optional*, switch): This is the switch to guard the device from deep sleep. All properties from sensor, at least the name is required to show up in HA. Defaults to off.
**deep_sleep_id** (*Optional*, :ref:`config-id`): The ID of the deep sleep component this guard switch controls. If not specified, it will control the default deep sleep component.
**guard** (*Optional*, :ref:`Switch <config-switch>`): Configuration for the guard switch:
- **name** (**Required**, string): The name of the switch in Home Assistant
- All other options from :ref:`Switch <config-switch>` are supported (icon, inverted, etc.)
- The switch defaults to OFF (guard disabled)
- When ON, prevents the device from entering deep sleep regardless of other conditions

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The documentation for the "Deep Sleep Component" has been updated to include new features and configuration options. A new "Deep Sleep Guard" switch has been introduced, which prevents the device from entering deep sleep mode when enabled. This update includes new configuration parameters: deep_sleep_id and guard, enhancing the management of the deep sleep functionality while retaining existing actions like deep_sleep.prevent and deep_sleep.allow.

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components/deep_sleep.rst Updated documentation to include new features: added "Deep Sleep Guard" switch and new config options deep_sleep_id and guard. Retained existing sections on deep_sleep.prevent and deep_sleep.allow.

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components/deep_sleep.rst (3)

196-197: Improve the explanation's structure and formatting.

While the explanation is accurate, its readability could be enhanced by structuring it into bullet points or paragraphs. Consider this restructuring:

-You may have calls to deep_sleep.allow or enter from other places which can re-enable deep sleep. An on_value handler based on a periodically checked sensor value (battery level okay: prevent, low: allow), or some other automation from Home Assistant. In that case this can be overriden and the device goes to deep sleep nevertheless. To be absolutely sure, you can use this switch. When enabled and the timer reaches run_duration, deep sleep will be postponed until it is disabled again. Any call to deep_sleep.enter will be ignored, too.
+The Deep Sleep Guard switch provides absolute control over deep sleep behavior:
+
+- It overrides any calls to ``deep_sleep.allow`` or ``deep_sleep.enter`` from other sources (like sensor-based handlers or Home Assistant automations)
+- When enabled:
+  - Deep sleep is postponed if the timer reaches ``run_duration``
+  - All calls to ``deep_sleep.enter`` are ignored
+- The device will only enter deep sleep when the guard is disabled

198-205: Enhance the code example with more configuration scenarios.

The current example shows the basic configuration. Consider adding examples that demonstrate:

     switch:
       - platform: deep_sleep
         deep_sleep_id: deep_sleep_1
         guard:
           name: Deep Sleep Guard
+          # Optional configurations
+          id: deep_sleep_guard_1
+          icon: mdi:sleep-off
+          disabled_by_default: false
+
+    # Example with automation
+    automation:
+      - trigger:
+          platform: mqtt
+          topic: "device/maintenance_mode"
+        then:
+          - switch.turn_on: deep_sleep_guard_1

206-207: Expand the configuration documentation with more details.

The configuration documentation could be more comprehensive. Consider adding:

 - **deep_sleep_id** (*Optional*, :ref:`config-id`): ID of the deep_sleep component.
-  - **guard** (*Optional*, switch): This is the switch to guard the device from deep sleep. All properties from sensor, at least the name is required to show up in HA. Defaults to off.
+  - **guard** (*Optional*, switch): A switch to prevent the device from entering deep sleep mode.
+    - **name** (**Required**, string): The name of the switch in Home Assistant
+    - **id** (*Optional*, :ref:`config-id`): Manually specify the ID for this switch
+    - **icon** (*Optional*, icon): Icon to display. Defaults to ``mdi:sleep-off``
+    - **disabled_by_default** (*Optional*, boolean): If true, the switch will be disabled by default. Defaults to ``false``
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196-207: Verify documentation completeness with related PR.

The documentation looks complete and well-structured. However, please verify that all features mentioned in the related esphome PR #7718 are covered in this documentation update.

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