PD-2424 / 26.04 / PD-2424-move-ntp-servers-settings

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Jira URL: https://ixsystems.atlassian.net/browse/PD-2424

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Vale Style Guide Issues (Previous - Click to expand)

Vale Style Guide Issues

📊 Summary: 115 issues found in changed files - 18 errors, 2 warnings, 95 suggestions

Changed files with issues:

content/SCALE/SCALEUIReference/SystemSettings/AdvancedSettingsScreen.md (73 issues)

• Lines 38, 104, 451, 528 - suggestion: Keep sentences under 30 words
• Lines 38, 187, 438, 440, 479 - error: Don't add '(s)' to a singular noun. Use plural instead.
• Lines 68, 70, 71, 72, 73, 86, 120, 121, 140, 151, 152, 181, 350, 388, 389, 457, 506, 507, 536 - suggestion: Use active voice instead of passive voice
• Line 104 - suggestion: Spell out 'MOTD' on first use
• Lines 121, 181, 480 - suggestion: Don't use language (such as 'disabled') that defines people by their disability.
• Line 131 - suggestion: Spell out 'TSL' on first use
• Lines 149, 152, 293 - error: Use 'hostname' instead of 'host name'
• Lines 219, 451 - suggestion: Try to simplify this sentence.
• Line 240 - error: Use 'filesystem' instead of 'file system'
• Lines 490, 536 - error: Use 'Controller 1' instead of 'controller a'

content/SCALE/SCALEUIReference/SystemSettings/GeneralSettingsScreens.md (42 issues)

• Lines 3, 66 - suggestion: Use Oxford comma before 'and' in lists
• Lines 64, 66, 106, 120, 139, 140, 160, 194, 197 - suggestion: Use active voice instead of passive voice
• Line 66 - suggestion: Keep sentences under 30 words
• Lines 66, 191 - suggestion: Consider 'TrueNAS' instead of 'TrueNAS'
• Line 74 - suggestion: Use Title Case for headings
• Line 82 - error: Avoid contractions. Use 'do not' instead of 'don't'.
• Line 101 - suggestion: Spell out 'EULA' on first use
• Line 102 - warning: Use first person (such as 'I') sparingly.
• Line 102 - suggestion: Spell out 'AGREE' on first use
• Line 134 - warning: Use first person (such as ' I') sparingly.
• Line 138 - error: Don't add '(s)' to a singular noun. Use plural instead.
• Line 140 - suggestion: Don't use language (such as 'disabled') that defines people by their disability.
• Line 161 - suggestion: Avoid using first-person plural (we, us, our)
• Line 192 - error: Use 'hostname' instead of 'host name'
• Line 204 - suggestion: Use 'login' instead of 'Log In'
• Line 204 - error: Use 'login' instead of 'Log In'

🔧 To fix: Review the issues above and update your documentation accordingly.

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Vale Style Guide Issues (Previous - Click to expand)

Vale Style Guide Issues

📊 Summary: 115 issues found in changed files - 18 errors, 2 warnings, 95 suggestions

Changed files with issues:

content/SCALE/SCALEUIReference/SystemSettings/AdvancedSettingsScreen.md (73 issues)

• Lines 38, 104, 451, 528 - suggestion: Keep sentences under 30 words
• Lines 38, 187, 438, 440, 479 - error: Don't add '(s)' to a singular noun. Use plural instead.
• Lines 68, 70, 71, 72, 73, 86, 120, 121, 140, 151, 152, 181, 350, 388, 389, 457, 506, 507, 536 - suggestion: Use active voice instead of passive voice
• Line 104 - suggestion: Spell out 'MOTD' on first use
• Lines 121, 181, 480 - suggestion: Don't use language (such as 'disabled') that defines people by their disability.
• Line 131 - suggestion: Spell out 'TSL' on first use
• Lines 149, 152, 293 - error: Use 'hostname' instead of 'host name'
• Lines 219, 451 - suggestion: Try to simplify this sentence.
• Line 240 - error: Use 'filesystem' instead of 'file system'
• Lines 490, 536 - error: Use 'Controller 1' instead of 'controller a'

content/SCALE/SCALEUIReference/SystemSettings/GeneralSettingsScreens.md (42 issues)

• Lines 3, 66 - suggestion: Use Oxford comma before 'and' in lists
• Lines 64, 66, 106, 120, 139, 140, 160, 194, 197 - suggestion: Use active voice instead of passive voice
• Line 66 - suggestion: Keep sentences under 30 words
• Lines 66, 191 - suggestion: Consider 'TrueNAS' instead of 'TrueNAS'
• Line 74 - suggestion: Use Title Case for headings
• Line 82 - error: Avoid contractions. Use 'do not' instead of 'don't'.
• Line 101 - suggestion: Spell out 'EULA' on first use
• Line 102 - warning: Use first person (such as 'I') sparingly.
• Line 102 - suggestion: Spell out 'AGREE' on first use
• Line 134 - warning: Use first person (such as ' I') sparingly.
• Line 138 - error: Don't add '(s)' to a singular noun. Use plural instead.
• Line 140 - suggestion: Don't use language (such as 'disabled') that defines people by their disability.
• Line 161 - suggestion: Avoid using first-person plural (we, us, our)
• Line 192 - error: Use 'hostname' instead of 'host name'
• Line 204 - suggestion: Use 'login' instead of 'Log In'
• Line 204 - error: Use 'login' instead of 'Log In'

🔧 To fix: Review the issues above and update your documentation accordingly.

[DjP-iX]

@linzi-ix This looks fine for NTP servers, did you also review for any other inconsistencies between the docs and the General and Advanced Settings screens?

[linzi-ix]

@linzi-ix This looks fine for NTP servers, did you also review for any other inconsistencies between the docs and the General and Advanced Settings screens?

It's been a hot minute since I did this ticket, but I think I did, yes.

[github-actions]

Vale Style Guide Issues

📊 Summary: 115 issues found in changed files - 18 errors, 2 warnings, 95 suggestions

Changed files with issues:

content/SCALE/SCALEUIReference/SystemSettings/AdvancedSettingsScreen.md (73 issues)

• Lines 38, 104, 451, 528 - suggestion: Keep sentences under 30 words
• Lines 38, 187, 438, 440, 479 - error: Don't add '(s)' to a singular noun. Use plural instead.
• Lines 68, 70, 71, 72, 73, 86, 120, 121, 140, 151, 152, 181, 350, 388, 389, 457, 506, 507, 536 - suggestion: Use active voice instead of passive voice
• Line 104 - suggestion: Spell out 'MOTD' on first use
• Lines 121, 181, 480 - suggestion: Don't use language (such as 'disabled') that defines people by their disability.
• Line 131 - suggestion: Spell out 'TSL' on first use
• Lines 149, 152, 293 - error: Use 'hostname' instead of 'host name'
• Lines 219, 451 - suggestion: Try to simplify this sentence.
• Line 240 - error: Use 'filesystem' instead of 'file system'
• Lines 490, 536 - error: Use 'Controller 1' instead of 'controller a'

content/SCALE/SCALEUIReference/SystemSettings/GeneralSettingsScreens.md (42 issues)

• Lines 3, 66 - suggestion: Use Oxford comma before 'and' in lists
• Lines 64, 66, 106, 120, 139, 140, 160, 194, 197 - suggestion: Use active voice instead of passive voice
• Line 66 - suggestion: Keep sentences under 30 words
• Lines 66, 191 - suggestion: Consider 'TrueNAS' instead of 'TrueNAS'
• Line 74 - suggestion: Use Title Case for headings
• Line 82 - error: Avoid contractions. Use 'do not' instead of 'don't'.
• Line 101 - suggestion: Spell out 'EULA' on first use
• Line 102 - warning: Use first person (such as 'I') sparingly.
• Line 102 - suggestion: Spell out 'AGREE' on first use
• Line 134 - warning: Use first person (such as ' I') sparingly.
• Line 138 - error: Don't add '(s)' to a singular noun. Use plural instead.
• Line 140 - suggestion: Don't use language (such as 'disabled') that defines people by their disability.
• Line 161 - suggestion: Avoid using first-person plural (we, us, our)
• Line 192 - error: Use 'hostname' instead of 'host name'
• Line 204 - suggestion: Use 'login' instead of 'Log In'
• Line 204 - error: Use 'login' instead of 'Log In'

🔧 To fix: Review the issues above and update your documentation accordingly.

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