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Two changes: 1. Added the word "important" to note 3 to match the wording of the definition. 2. Removed the word "additional" from note 3, to match the wording of the definition
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For note 1 of the Understanding document, matched the change to note 3 in the audio description definition by adding "important" in front of "information" In the same note, swapped out "provided" in favour of "conveyed", in the belief that is more accurate. For example, if a scene shows something blowing up, and there is the sound of an explosion that matches, it is more accurate to say the sound conveys the visual explosion than to say the sound "provides" the visual explosion.
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Two changes to informative content (a note) in normative content (definitions):
Two changes to the first note in the informative Understanding document:
These changes are only made here for 1.2.3 for ease of review